My dream and my vision
Before I wanted to be a scientist, pilot, president. I couldn't get my vision clearly. At that time, I hadn't met God well, so I 'd thought about only money and honor. It was all my greed. But now I have clear vision in God.
I have prayed for a lot of time for my clear vision. I think God respond to me.
My vision is to protect children's purity. I want to teach them well at childhood. I want to make them to keep their purity long time and make them to live their childhood with full of love, not full of hurt in their mind.
Even though, I can't be a elementary teacher. I wanna get a job that related with children. For example, I can go Africa to save children, I can work in orphanage, I can be a kinder garden teacher also. It means that elementary teacher is not my ultimate dream, To being a person who protect children's purity and connect them with God is my ultimate dream and vision.
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ReplyDeleteI'm very glad to see you find your vision in God. And I also agree that we should help children in the way of keeping their purity in God.
ReplyDeleteHowever, I see some grammatical mistakes in your essay. (For example, the first sentence) And the first sentence of the third paragraph, Even though, I can't be a elementary teacher, still makes me confused. So, do you mean that you want to be a elementary teacher?
Ben, I hope you become a great teacher. I found a mistake in your sentence. In the third sentence you wrote I`d but it is just an I. Have you thought of a way to protect children form getting hurt?
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