Wednesday, March 27, 2013

Essay1-Gandi

My vision and my dream

I want to talk about my vision and my dream. My dream is to become a doctor and cure many people not just their physical problems but their minds too. This is my dream. I do not know how God will call to do. He might call me to become something else. My fear is that my greed and my selfish my will make me become something else than what God wanted me to be.
When I was young, I did not want to become a doctor. The fact that my parents are doctors made me feel when I become a doctor my life is just copying my parents. I wanted to become anything but doctor. But as I grew up, I figured out that doctor is a fascinating job. So I changed my goal to become a doctor.
My dream when I become a doctor is to just work hard as a doctor and help many people who are hard. My favorite doctor is Gi-Ryeo-Jang. He is a really awesome doctor who helped the poor people who does not have money to get medical treatment. My final goal is to become like him. I think doctors should not get that much money because many of students who wants to become a doctor is doing that for money. If doctors get less salary, only people who really wants to help the poor will become a doctor.

1 comment:

  1. I think the part about the doctors' salary is a very creative idea.
    Also, if you add more information about why you want to be a doctor, it would help the readers understand about you.
    What did you see in doctors that you found fascinating?

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