james essay4
I am adam. I live in the garden of eden. I have good friends. lion, turtle, mosquito, sheep is all my friends. I named them all. Also God is my friend, too. I was alone human in this village since God gave me sara last month. God is close with me. I talk with him every day. I'm living so happily.
I can eat every thing in this village But just not only one fruit in the middle of village. I don't know why but God told me to not eat that one. He said that I will die if I eat that one. that is very scary so I don't give an eye on that fruit.
3 days later...
A snake was talking with sara, but I didn't mind because snake was not bad. Sara is coming to me with snake. sara seems to be little exciting. sara took me to the middle of the village where the fruit was.
she said to me "adam! lets eat this friut! snake told me the secret of this fruit! it makes our eyes open and know what is right and wrong! snake said that we can be like God!" when she finished her talk she grabed the fruit and ate it. And she gave the fruit to me. I was frustrating but ate it because sara ate that.
after we ate the fruit. we saw that we were naked all the time!! It was very embarrassing. So we covered our body with some plants and hide in to some cave. I am very scary because of what God have said.
As I thought, God was finding me out of the cave. I could't go out.. he founded me in a minute. he roared to me "why are you hiding from me!!". and he said "i know that you have eaten the fruit. i'm very disappointed to you. get out of here." he threw me out of the garden of eden.
source from bible.
James, this is a good view of Adam, but did you use the English Bible as a source? It would be good to do so, this way you could find the English name for Adam's wife.
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