I dreamed this nightmare at 7. My dream was real and very very fantastic and wonderful dream. So i can remeber it, even though now i am 18. It was little scary but I was hero at that dream. I'll tell you my wonderful dream. Dream is not so clear, so i will add my imagination a little.
I was just a 7 years old. I was riding a train with my friend. I think there was a many people.
Suddenly, there was a fire on the train. The train was instantly turned into chaos after the fire.
It looks like hell in my eyes
I and my friend were in full of afraid, so we just sit down at there and cried. what makes the matter worse, a group of gangster came and hit the people. I thought there was nothing i can do and i just die. People were screaming and running away. It really looks like hell.
Suddenly, my friend started to fight with them. Wow, he was very strong. He was defeating gangsters. I thought i can be loser, so i participated at fighting. Wow I was stronger than him.
I was fighting. It was like scene out of action movie. We beated off all the gangster, and the train became peacefull.
This is my dream. I know that this story is really crazy. But I really dreamed it at seven. when I was in kindergarden, I try to find out this dream's source. I think i learned about hell in church at that time, and I like drama named '야인시대' which is about gangsters.
I think my dream is so messy and crazy. But i was hero in this dream, so i like it.
Wow!! this essay is very good,fantastic,cool and very nice.
ReplyDeleteIt's very good, fantastic, and cool essay, haha. I think everyone should have been dreaming this kind of dreams at least once when they were young.
ReplyDeleteIt would be nice if you paid more attention to grammar. 'i' should be capitalized, and there were many 'a' misused.
Anyway, thank you for sharing!
Ben I enjoyed your dream! :) It is really cool that you were a hero in the dream! I hope you can be a hero in the real life too! :-)
ReplyDeleteIt was very interesting Ben :) What a funny story. It's good to hear that you have beat the gangsters.
ReplyDeleteHowever, I think this essay would be better if you have revised it. Tenses are not matched, and there are many spelling errors.
Why did you choose to describe this dream? Weren't there any interesting dreams that you have recently?
Your essay is very cute :) it shows how your childhood was. Since you was young at that time, after the dream did you ever think you as a real hero? And acted like one of them?
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